Part of improving any piece of writing is adapting it to get the best effect. Changing, adapting, adding and subtracting words. Utilizing one’s full vocabulary and knowledge of language resources.
Today Mr Eames supplied us with a motivational writing task using an image on the data projector. We had 5 minutes to create a narrative paragraph, setting the scene.
We then turned on track changes to create a masterpiece of writing. Tracking changes encouraged us to make changes.
This is a piece of writing by Daniel. First version black, first additions blue then next changes purple.
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